Wednesday, September 19, 2012

Peer Review 2

While peer reviewing, I learned a few things about my paper that went well and didn't go well. My partner told me that I had some good examples and good summaries of the television shows, however I needed to add a few more in other sections. My ending to my paper is a little weak and I needed to discuss more of the good values I learned about watching the Kardashians. I am going to add a paragraph or two at the end just summarizing up all of the shows I watching and how it shaped me to be who I am today. I won't change some of my stronger points in the paper and I will leave all of my summaries the way they are.

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