Discovery Draft Review

This discovery draft really allowed me to get all my thoughts I had about this paper and just simply write it out in an unorganized manner. I am writing a television show narrative that shows the difference in the television shows I watched as a little girl to what I watch now. I began by discussing how watching Little Bear as a young girl made me feel and what I learned from it, then discussed how watching Hannah Montana as a teenager was relatable to my life then and then how Keeping up with the Kardashians is taking over pop culture and teaching invaluable lessons. My goal for this paper is to show how much my taste in television has evolved throughout my life and it shows what people really care about watching in their spare time. Working with my group member was very helpful because we were both in the same position where we were concerned our paper wasn't going in the right direction but after reading each others paper we realized what was missing and figured out ways to make them better. In my next draft, I am going to have a more organized and structured paper that does not have bullets or notes on it. I will include more analysis about the way the television shows affected me growing up and how it made me perceive the world as I know it.