Response to paper 2 feedback

As I look through my paper and see several sentences and paragraphs highlighted, I feel a little bit relieved knowing that some part of my paper makes sense. After reading the feedback I got, I completely see what she was talking about. I talk about 3 paragraphs to describe what Cosmopolitan magazine is all about and what it does rather than jumping into the main idea of the paper. Later in the paper I discuss how the cover is effective and what not and I will maybe move that part of the paper closer to the front to make my point and argument very clear and concise. I feel pretty confident with this paper because I have a detailed and good start to the paper and now I just have to continue to revise and edit it to make it perfect.